Good morning,ψ. Today is my off day. I go to watch the movie. “The Devil Wears Prada 2” I imagine coordinate for the movie. Keynote is black and red. Top is black shirt. Long skirt have gathers. Shoes are red ballet shoes. Pierced earrings are deep red coral. With a denim jacket. I wear usually office casual or relax clothes. Today I wear clothes that sit in the closet. I feel luxurious. ーーー Good morning, ミューさん。 全体として、とてもいい日記です。 特に今回は 「服を選ぶ＝体験の一部にしている」 この発想がきれいに出ています。 ■ フィードバ

Good morning,ψ. It’s raining in this GW. I have worked five days. I have an off day tomorrow. I’m going to go a cinema. It’s a spring in last year when I watched a movie. I had difficulty life since last summer. I got my life back. I will watch “The Devil Wears Prada 2". I will enjoy luxurious world. ーーー Good morning, ミューさん。 まず結論から言うと、全体としてとても伝わる良い日記です。 特に最後の I got my life back. I will enjoy luxurious world. この流れ、とても自然で芯があります。 ■ フィードバック（英語） いくつかだけ整えると、より自然になります。 ▶ 気になるポイント It

Good morning,ψ. I had started a freelance writer last summer. After that, I fallen the freelance valley. Freelance valley is metaphor that troubles are obscurity and zero income terms. My valley is like needle. I had been working any job for everyday, all day long. However I hadn’t made enough my living. Now, I have passaged the valley perfectly. My income went over former this month. It’s wealth beyond the valley. ーーー Good morning, ミューさん。 とてもいい内容です。体験に芯があって、ちゃんと物語になっています。 では

Good morning,ψ. It’s rain. Raindrops are falling in the earth. The sound lasts. The color is white gray. It’s like white noise. In rainy morning, I feel solitude like in the ruins. ーーー Good morning, ミューさん。 とても良い雰囲気の文章です。静けさがきちんと出ています。 ではいつもの形でいきますね。 ■ Feedback (English) Your text has a clear mood and imagery. The atmosphere is consistent and poetic, especially: white gray white noise ruins These elements connect well. Main issues: small grammar errors some unnatural phrasing

Good morning,ψ. It’s in Golden Week. However I have work day after day. Because writing isn’t source of revenue. I have three jobs. First, it’s a freelance writer. Second, part-time lecturer in my special field. And part-time hotel employee. It’s busy time for a hotel in holidays. I coordinate my second jobs with season. Two jobs differ busy time. So my income never stops. ーーー Good morning, ミューさん。 そして、かなりよく書けています。内容もはっきり伝わります。 では、いつもの形でいきますね。 ■ Feedback (English) Your writing

Good morning,ψ. Now I’m very hungry. Because I have a medical examination. I don’t eat since last night. I already eat a breakfast. I wake up by coffee and meals. I’m still in dream. I will eat lunch after medicine checkup. Menu is Udon or Teishoku. ーーー Good morning, ミューさん。 状況も気分もちゃんと伝わっていて、とてもいい日記です。 ✦ Feedback (in English) This entry is clear and natural in flow. You show: condition (hungry) reason (medical exam) habit (morning routine) plan (lunch) Very good structure. Mai

Good morning,ψ. Today’s rainy. I like rain sound. The kind of rain sound is a lot of in Japan. Suiu is a green rain. Hiu is a frying rain. Tora-ga-ame is a tiger’s rain. Kusuri-huru is medicines fall rain. Tenkyu is a beautiful word especially. Ten means heaven. Kyu means crying. Tenkyu expresses the sky cries. Personification is one of the Japan culture. So Japanese have believed that gods exist in all things in nature. ーーー Good morning, ミューさん。 とても良い文章です。今回は詩性と文化理解がしっかり結びつい

Good morning, ψ. It’s Sunday. It’s good day, but I have work. My schedule is tight. I work six days a week. Two days, I work at two places. Yesterday, I worked 10hours. I’m tired this morning. It’s not long time but heavy trouble. I drink a cup of coffee. Coffee in a morning is great beverage. I would enjoy next off day. I work precisely today and tomorrow. ーーー Good morning, ミューさん。 かなりハードな状況の中でも、きちんと整理して書けていますね。 ✦ Feedback (in English) This entry is clear and honest. You show

Good morning,ψ. I bought a book yesterday. It’s an illustrated jewel book. I make a story of jewels. I think of a new subject. It’s inclusion. The inclusion is relic things in jewel. It looks often a beautiful design. I feel fluctuation of the earth. I hope to read thoroughly next off day. ーーー Good morning, ミューさん。 とても良い流れです。創作（Jeweletta）と学び（本）がしっかり結びついています。 ✦ Feedback (in English) This entry is clear and creative. You show: action (buying a book) connection (jewels → your wor

Good morning, ψ. Yesterday, I watched some movie on YouTube with highball. The Lupa sticks in my mind. Lupa capitorina is involved in the Roman Empire. Lupa is a female wolf. She grew twins of the Roman king. The movie said she wasn’t an animal but a human. Lupa means a prostitue in Roma. They was discriminated against, but she lived tough. They contribute to prosper in Roma. I like a wolf in animal. My favorite animal story is Lobo, the King of Currumpaw. It was written by

Good morning,ψ. It’s cloudy. The sky is pale gray, almost white. The sky colors are unexpected. The Rayleigh scattering is cause of sky color. The blue is easy to be scattered. So the sky is blue when the sun shines in high. The red remains at the last. So the sky is red before the sun sets. The red moon is same theory. The moon looks red when the light is enough scattered. A lot of dust is the cause. The red moon is watched when it’s a dry fair weather or cloudy. Maybe it’s

Good morning,ψ. I cut my hair yesterday. It’s very nice. I feel light and fresh. My hair quality is unruly and thick,besides a lot of it. My cut hair looked like three black dogs. The hair is life of women. It’s general opinion. I think too. But the hair caring needs perseverance. ーーー Good morning, ミューさん。 軽さとリフレッシュ感がよく伝わる日記ですね。比喩も効いています。 ✦ Feedback (in English) Nice, vivid entry. You show: change → sensation → reflection a concrete image (“three black dogs”) a small cultural