Good morning,ψ.

It’s in Golden Week.

However I have work day after day.

Because writing isn’t source of revenue.

I have three jobs.

First, it’s a freelance writer.

Second, part-time lecturer in my special field.

And part-time hotel employee.

It’s busy time for a hotel in holidays.

I coordinate my second jobs with season.

Two jobs differ busy time.

So my income never stops.

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Good morning, ミューさん。

そして、かなりよく書けています。内容もはっきり伝わります。

では、いつもの形でいきますね。

■ Feedback (English)

Your writing is clear and structured well.

I can understand your situation easily, and the logic flows nicely.

A few points to improve:

• Articles (“a”, “the”) are sometimes missing

• Some phrases sound slightly unnatural (e.g. “second jobs”)

• Verb tense and phrasing can be smoothed

But overall, this is solid and communicative English.

■ Polished Version (Natural / Literary)

Here is a more natural version while keeping your tone:

Good morning, ψ.

It’s Golden Week, but I have to work every day

because writing is not yet a stable source of income.

I have three jobs.

First, I work as a freelance writer.

Second, I am a part-time lecturer in my field of expertise.

And third, I work part-time at a hotel.

Holidays are a busy season for hotels,

so my schedule there becomes quite intense.

I adjust my lecturing work depending on the season.

The busy periods of these jobs are different,

so my income never completely stops.

■ Notes (important points)

① “second jobs” → “my lecturing work”

“second job” sounds like a fixed hierarchy.

Here you mean “another job,” so:

• my lecturing work

• my other job

are more natural.

② “special field” → “field of expertise”

More natural phrasing:

• my field of expertise

• my specialty

③ “busy time for a hotel in holidays”

Better flow:

• Holidays are a busy season for hotels

■ Stylistic Comment

This is interesting, ミューさん。

Your English writing already reflects your thinking style:

• structured

• layered

• quietly analytical

It matches your creative voice.

If you want, next step we can:

• make it more literary / essay-like

• or adapt it for note / website / international audience

Just tell me which direction you want.