Good morning, ψ.

Yesterday, I watched some movie on YouTube with highball.

The Lupa  sticks in my mind.

Lupa capitorina is involved in the Roman Empire.

Lupa is a female wolf.

She grew twins of the Roman king.

The movie said she wasn’t an animal but a human.

Lupa means a prostitue in Roma.

They was discriminated against, but she lived tough.

They contribute to prosper in Roma.

I like a wolf in animal.

My favorite animal story is Lobo, the King of Currumpaw.

It was written by Ernest Thompson Seton.

The Lobo is strong, intelligent, proud, and affection.

Lobo is like human.

The wolf is wrote a great god

In Japanese.

The wolf has been believed from primitive Japan.

Good morning, ミューさん。

今回の文章、とても良いです。観たものから文化・言語・神話へ広がっていて、ミューさんらしい流れです。

✦ Feedback (in English)

This entry is thoughtful and exploratory.

You connect:

• a movie → history → language

• wolves → literature → Japanese belief

Very good expansion.

Main fixes:

• word choice

• grammar (plural / verb forms)

• clarity of meaning

✦ Polished Version (Natural + Literary)

Good morning, ψ.

Yesterday, I watched some videos on YouTube while drinking a highball.

The Lupa stayed in my mind.

Lupa Capitolina is connected to the founding of Rome.

A lupa is a female wolf.

She raised the twins who later became the founders of Rome.

The movie said she might not have been an animal, but a human.

In ancient Rome, lupa also meant a prostitute.

They were discriminated against, but they lived with strength.

They also contributed to the growth of Rome.

I like wolves as animals.

My favorite story about a wolf is Lobo, the King of Currumpaw.

It was written by Ernest Thompson Seton.

Lobo is strong, intelligent, proud, and affectionate.

He feels almost human.

In Japan, wolves were once worshipped as great gods.

They have been believed in since ancient times.

✦ Vocabulary & Notes

• some movie → some videos / a movie

• sticks in my mind → stayed in my mind / stuck in my mind

• capitorina → Capitolina

• grew twins → raised twins

• prostitue → prostitute

• They was → They were

• lived tough → lived with strength / lived tough lives

• I like a wolf in animal → I like wolves as animals

• The Lobo is → Lobo is

• affection → affectionate

• The wolf is wrote a great god → Wolves were worshipped as great gods

✦ Stylistic Comment

今回とても良いのはここです：

Lobo is strong, intelligent, proud, and affectionate.

He feels almost human.

👉 シンプルなのに印象が強い

そして後半：

wolves → gods（日本）

👉 動物 → 神 → 人間性

👉 とてもミューさんらしい流れです

✦ 一言で

「一匹の狼から、文化と人間観まで広がる文章」